The Random
Posts : 24 Join date : 2009-12-18 Age : 32 Location : Adelaide, Australia
| Subject: The Random's sample RP Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:38 am | |
| OOC: I'm sorry I didn't post this earlier, I have had a bit of problems with my internet and as such was absent over the last week
"King Nothing" starts playing as an unfamiliar wrestler makes his way to the ring
The Fans are unsure on whether to cheer or boo this man
The new wrestler moves to collect a microphone before entering the ring
He then stares around at the crowd with a serious look on his face before raising to mic to his lips
?????: I am The Random, Commit that to memory...
Because I don't want to have to repeat myself for you worthless piles of trash!
The Fans immediately start voicing their disapproval of The Random
The Random: Shut up the hell up and listen to me!
The crowd don't seem to have recieved the message
The Random: You people are all the same!
you just sit there finding new people to alienate
you all make me sick!
The booing starts to get louder as The Random looks around
The Random: Go ahead and boo yourselves hoarse
Because I'm going to give you all something to cry about when your supposed "heroes" are all in the emergency ward...
And that's a fact!
The Random drops the mic and leaves the ring with an angry look on his face
OOC: Edited with labels at the start of each of my spoken pieces (Thanks LaSombra)
Last edited by The Random on Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:36 am; edited 3 times in total | |
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LaSombra
Posts : 17 Join date : 2009-11-15
| Subject: Re: The Random's sample RP Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:06 am | |
| Other than a few structure mistakes (make sure to ALWAYS label who is speaking in scripted form so it doesnt get confusing wen more than one person is speaking in one Roleplay) I like it... Would have preferred, perhaps some dialogue form the commentary team since you were out in the ring, but other than that i thought it did the job. | |
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